71. Society of Environmental description by highlighting the central idea of
environment, including social and physical environment. Social environment, also called the living environment, which has sizes, large and social development situation in society, a city as small as one street, a hospital in a room; the natural environment, mainly referring to the climate, geography and natural scene changes. Description of environment, that is, the characters activities or events, the development environment is directly related to the specific circumstances and conditions for description. Highlighted by describing the central idea of the environment can be broadly take the following two forms:
(1) a separate paragraph or larger space to concentrate on description. By describing the environment, show picture of life, the natural landscape, to commend the people, the performance of topic, expressing his thoughts and feelings.
such as Platform with a red face list, the top marked 241 days with the characters safe and accident-free record, close to the contest winners of the photo. Red list next to a small blackboard on which was written with white powder this morning radio news and newspaper summary of the capital. Close to the station next to a poster WASH. On the platform,cheap UGG boots, there are two or three lug baskets radish farmers are preparing to get on the train into town. A few steps outside the station's two staff members are discussing something. Platform has a small fountain in the middle, obviously carefully designed. The middle of a small fountain and laid a rockery, rockery planted a tree a foot high trees. Stone fountain from the tree hole erupted below, drops of water radiance, a small pagoda on the rockery washed spotless. Several strains of the platform two kinds of apricot trees, bloom is brilliant, attracting a swarm of bees. Bees buzzing edge dance songs side, dotted with the quiet station.
This is the typical concentration of paragraphs devoted to a large description of the living environment. Writer's note describes the station's orientation order situation - after staff Railway to the cause of.
This suggested to us that during the great lengths to describe concentrated environment: orientation in order to be clear, the purpose of description should be clear.
(2) As the article in the development of the story, interspersed with three words five or point to the full length of the brief description of environment. By describing the environment, explain the background, rendering the atmosphere, contrast character psychology, to promote the development of plot or character against the background of the will, character and image, highlighting the central idea.
you read the following essay, understand what the text describes the role of the environment:
my father my father more than 40 years old. He was very concerned about my study. It was fourth grade, because I wanted to have fun, so homework is poor, 60 points before the end of the average subjects. Teacher decided to mend my summer, so keep up on the fifth grade. Outside the heavy rain that day, pouring in general. Are worried about, my father came to me and said: No way, I had to follow my father got into the rain. Along the way, the rain harder and harder, people poured too blinded. Raincoat to my father try to move here, for fear I shower thoroughly. Approaching the school, I suddenly remembered that he did not take textbooks. Dad said to me: He walked a step back three landslide. Suddenly, he had about Zaidao, but also desperate to stand up, covered in mud and water. Then, the father figure that stumbled in the vast rain and fog gradually disappeared in the.
At this point, my eyes moist, warm heart: I have no reason not to learn it?
This is a deeply moving essay. The article was moving, and things happen in a typical environment and description of the environment, cleverly interspersed are inseparable. Description of the environment several times: in the vast rain and fog in the. No wonder the father's actions that
this passage also tells us, interspersed with the story development environment when described: the time to properly interspersed; description of the purpose must be clear; description of the statement should be concise, to prevent distracting.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the description of environment? Description of how to highlight the central idea of the environment? Description of the environment should pay attention to what?
(2) open one to two before the tilting or write their own narrative assignments, to see how the text is highlighted through the description of the environment the central idea. Paper have any questions, pen to paper have changed.
72. Institute highlights the central idea by describing the scene
write notes (including writing activities) article, by one, several or a number of scenes (in character as the center of activity into. Therefore, the written scene, the excellent performance figures, highlighting the central idea of the premise. Some articles do not highlight the central idea,UGG boots cheap, characters are not prominent, not clear which one of the major things that did not show an important scene after written.
how to write scenes, highlighted by the central idea of the scene described it?
(1) arranged
photographer battle scenes: sometimes the battlefield panoramic bird's eye view, sometimes closer to the lens, shooting the special character of local fighting. No panorama, special people to lose a broad background, foil; no close-ups, this grand scene becomes empty, the main characters would be difficult to impress people. Description of the scene is also true: to write the whole scene environment, background, atmosphere or character activity profiles, only rich content of the article, the reader can have a complete picture of events; written Typical language, actions, expressions, etc, to highlight the individual, can be impressive, the performance of flesh and blood to the whole scene out, will give readers the significance of events, key figures have a more profound understanding. Such as Explosives on the Where is it? He twice put the explosives on the bridge along, have slipped down. If the explosives on the riverbed, and fried is not destroyed bunker. At this time, Liao (liao) Chong Fenghao sounded bright, earth-shattering Han Shasheng Youyuanerjin. Extremely critical moment, Dong Cunrui heads held high, standing under the bridge, the left hand hold up explosives, stand up under bridges, right hand suddenly pull the guide shell fire. Fuse, Fire lit up his face generally cast steel. 1 second, 2 seconds?? Him like a giant erect, his eyes light radiation with determination. Looks into the distance he looked up, wear out, shouting: high slope slip, to be placed explosives; on the river bed, and fried is not destroyed bunker; Chong Fenghao sounded loud and clear, Han Shasheng from far and near, if not immediately blow up the bunker, a large force will impede progress, causing more casualties), to write his In this way, the hero Just want to remind students: In the arrangement
such as Mt. They use strategically located and difficult terrain, the enemy rushed to the crushed again and again. Squad leader Ma Baoyu calmly directing the battle, the enemy approached, and before he hit the command. Ge Zhenlin, vice squad leader shot to beat screaming, as if that could not finish his small spray gun filled with anger. Warrior Song Xueyi put his arm waving a hand grenade thrown a circle, so pull out all the effort. Hu Fu-Cai Lin Hu and two small fighters face tensed, concentrating target the enemy. A long battle, the enemy still can not step forward. In the rugged mountain road, lying in disorder many of the enemy's body. This is a blocking enemy's scenes. The first and difficult, large casualties, highlighted the
(2) the performance of both written. This is a game, get-together for the purposes of such scenes. Because such scenes are from both sides involved, so in the description of such scenes, they need to write Thus, the central idea of the event, the image of a large event in the context of this show, stand out. The following words in these paragraphs is the Students participate in the competition all in high spirits, high morale. Field of applause, cheers, cheer sound into one. The first game of five (2) classes of students have won, in my class not to be outdone, Biede little face all red. I begin with the second game, I thought: that is resorted to feeding the hammer should win them. Decide the outcome of the moment began. Although we bite the bullet, Zhoujinmeitou, sweat out all urgent, but a trial of strength slippage feet. Seeing red banner on the rope begins to give them a class removed. Li is our worry, she forced shouting: jumped up, shouting,
the first to write a few paragraphs that the overall scene; then write the first game a little of both performance; and then set the second inning to write Throughout the whole
(3) simple to write their own feelings and experiences, but avoid too much comments. This is,
Thinking exercises】 【
(1) highlight the central idea of the scene described in terms of what is important? By describing how to highlight the central idea of the scene? Description should pay attention to what?
(2) open one to two people used to write their own narrative, written activities, exercises, take a look at the text written description of how well the scene, whether to highlight the central idea of service. A problem, you begin to change for a change.
73. Society of Landscape Description in highlighting the central idea through
travel or scene-based articles written, to show through specific unique geographical landscape and natural scenery, to praise the broken pieces of the magnificent and wonderful nature. In addition, write notes in the article, describing the scene are often needed. In writing these articles, can be interspersed with scenes Description: explain the background, rendering the atmosphere; conditions for the laying of the story; to promote the development of plot; off people's character, contrast characters; expressing his inner thoughts and feelings;?? In short, to help scene description, to achieve the purpose of highlighting the central idea. We read the essay below to experience the scenery description of how to highlight through the central idea:
my little brother I have a year-old brother, called the Little strong. Although he is small, but very willing to help people. I remember it was a summer, me and my brother to a nearby park to play. The scenery here is so beautiful!
rockery bravely stands. Under the willow blowing in the breeze gently swaying, colorful flowers, bloom. Brother picked up a pebble, sideways, raised his right hand, drew a curve in the air, into the river shot. Pebble in the water ahead, sparking the layers of waves, like a boat full speed ahead!
we play in the playground, when suddenly his brother disappeared, I am very anxious to find a half hour later, only to find him. I asked, before we know him to help a little girl find her mother gone. It turned out he was playing, I found a little sister to find her mother crying on the couch! So, my brother led the little girl went to her mother. Them to the rockery, pools around the gourd, over corridor, turn a lot of places, finally found the little sister of the mother. Auntie was pleased to his younger brother, said: Brother quickly said: After listening to his words, I'm happy, said:
the way home, we are very happy. Brother, Life on a String, lively,bailey UGG boots, innocent look really cute. Joy of singing birds in the trees, the pond frog cried loudly, as if to say: description of the scene twice. Start by describing the scene, not only bring out when we play a happy mood and brother intelligent, smart, but also for following his brother's sister, led a stranger to find her mother stating the environment; end by describing joyfully singing frog pond cried loudly,
essay, reminds us:
(1) interspersed with scenes described, the purpose must be clear. Scene description, the article must be the main line, as the central idea of service. The only way to describe things have purpose, to act as a From the central theme for the scenery and paint a portrait, not only can not be enriched text, and make the article much, heterogeneous.
This requires that we: write notes on when, on the real life of the natural scenery, there must be a into the article, taking into account these features clearly inserted in the end you want to write what purpose.
(2) interspersed with scenes described, the timing must be appropriate. Can paint a portrait in the article at the beginning, you can also paint a portrait of the end of the article can also be inserted at any time in the middle of an article to write features. In short, as the plot unfolds, the narrative, the need for performance figures and key at the scene at the description.
(3) interspersed with scenes described, the form must be flexible. Can be a short passage, it can be one or two words, but also one or two terms. In short, write narrative article, describing the scene is the theme of the performance of aid; so to be concise, enough is enough, not too much description of scenery, so as not to dilute the main plot of the article.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) write notes in (including activities) article, what role are inserted to describe things? How to write the scene by highlighting the central idea of plug?
(2) open one to two people used to write their own notes (including activities) assignments, to see the text there is no plug to write the scene, the scene is not inserted to write prominent central idea in favor. Problems, dynamic document have changed.
74. Learn through the detailed descriptions highlight the central idea of
details, refer to figure some of the subtle decoration, expression, movement, language, and subtle things. Description of details, that is, to describe these minutiae, painted.
life is full of detail, detail description of the use of a wide range. It can be used to write notes, can also be used to paint a portrait bar.
surface, the detail description insignificant, but it is actually small in the big. It can make the article even more flesh and blood, plump and beautiful, but also contagious. To write a single note, the wonderful details of the description: can be used to set the suspense, as a foreshadowing, foreshadowing, and promote the development of the story; can be used to reveal the inner character of the complex and delicate feelings concealed; can be used to show character's personality characteristics, work attitude, life style and the spirit of quality, so tall and abundance of characters even more, and then highlight and deepen the central idea of the article, the article left a deep impression on the reader. Such as He (Prime Minister Chou En-lai) over righting my chair, and then went into the back. Premier Zhou Enlai came to a small swivel righting this detail, at first glance may seem trivial, but the real deep meaning contained: Premier Zhou despite working all night, and already very tired, but still failing to care for life negligence is not trivial. It showed the spirit of Premier Zhou meticulous, good breeding and living habits. Read the following essay we come to experience the details of the text describes the characteristics and functions:
my dad my dad after demobilization, in the sixteenth Bureau. He is very concerned about me and my brother to learn. It was the first section of the review time. Dad had to back to see us every night, natural, geographical and moral character, have to back up in the morning for a while, then took out a box for us, . My father said: Dad where there are nine boxes 'queen fine' it! Dad to a good result that we can test, actually spent so much money. Now he wears a sweater with a white glove or my mother did it woven wire, or worn on the hair in the armed forces that top Army cotton cap. Was previously bought a pair of cotton-padded shoes, for several years, until now he was wearing.
thought of these, I quietly remind the brother: we must learn, as father, mother glory to live up to my father, a mother of our love.
This is a true and touching essay. Article was able to achieve this effect, and the proper use of detailed descriptions of the inseparable. Essay writing in front of my father to As a box of Is true and tight, naturally leads to below. Behind when his father learned to details. The narrative details and the main contents of the article by contrast, wrote the father would rather save their frugality, to our infinite care and high expectations of character, naturally leads to the article at the end of paragraph. From this essay, we can draw the description of details to show through the characters, and highlight the
thoughts to some of the experiences and problems needing attention:
(1) details to be true, are real, must not careless or embellished. If the distortion of the details, it lost its luster due.
(2) details to typical, should be able to promote the development of plot, highlighting the central idea as the standard. This requires that we wrote the paper can not be free to live in any of the details included in the article, must be selected to
(3) to describe details of arrangements for the timing, the details of the description and scenes, environment, scenery and other description closely linked to the article, the financial circumstances of the organic being.
(4) details to describe detailed, specific, image, realistic, but also precise and appropriate words, painting vivid form. Of course, to do this, carefully observe the daily fine (even if it is a look, a small performance, change), and accurate memory of the situation is the premise.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the description of details? Why is the description of details can be Detailed description of how to represent people or things, highlight the central idea?
(2) open one to two people or things in his past descriptions of the exercises, there are no details to see the text description, detail description of how to express through the person or thing, have any questions, you begin to change a change.
75. Society highlighted by describing the central idea of the side
write articles, in addition to the appearance of a direct characterization, language, action, mental activity, describing characters from the front, highlighting the central idea, there is a writing man method - the side description. Side of the description is to indirectly reflect the character description is linked to that person through other persons or descriptions of things to indirect contrast, were he to achieve this outstanding performance in the character's purpose. From the expression of the effect, the sides are often better able to describe characteristics of the performance figures, and make us more subtle, more objective and more persuasive, the center is more prominent. Such as Through the spirit. Another example is the Sister Jiang The real Communists, We then read the following
essay, taste a small description of how to represent characters by side, highlighting the central idea:
What are my dad, and can be is
a meal my mother worked so hard to do, you can not know my father as a little hungry, a signle read his research paper. Dinner, I walked into his father's ears around shouting loudly: nagging, the father fetched a bowl of rice, 三下五除二, eating rice, but forgot to eat my mother made specifically for the father shrimp. Mom came over and asked: To eat the lunch, this time his mother sent for my father. Dad said: Dad looked at me, smiled and touched my face, said: , hear my mother laughed. Soon, I saw a father of scientific research awards, Puchi smiled. My mother asked me why I laugh, I told her: Especially the end of the article, the small of his answer by describing - mouth, praised the father and sleepless nights from the side and concentrate on the spirit of engaging in scientific research, point to understand the thrust of the article.
description by the side of the performance figures, highlighting the central idea, we should note two points:
① to be due to the characteristics of the article, you need to arrange the side of description, the purpose of enhancing, not abuse. Such as Therefore, only from the character of demeanor on and the use of
② side generally described simple, precise and appropriate to prevent the key description of submerged object, causing backfire. Thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the side of the description? Description of how the side to show character, highlighting the central idea?
(2) to COMPOSITION hundred Act (XIV)
76. Learn to talk
narrative in the debate, is the direct reasoning, the objective of the person or thing for analysis and commentary on issues opinions, ideas, to persuade others. It is of the characters, a profound understanding of things, insights, is the natural expression of true feelings, and it is narrative, descriptive, lyrical, description of the basic expressions in parallel. Pupils are learning to write narrative-based, and narrative rarely completely without any discussion of. Has a distinct emotional debate, as the central service directly. Discussions in the form of narrative, there are three:
First, Syria, after the first meeting. This form refers to the one at the beginning of the article, the first to ask questions to a person or thing, or express their views and assessment of, and then leads to the body. Methods to make statements at the beginning of the article, belong to this form. First statements, the article begins to make into the title, clean and clear.
Second, a narrative proposal. This form refers to the paper side of narrative paragraphs, while discussions, narrative and argument should be closely integrated throughout. Article proposed a narrative, argumentative and narrative complement each other, complement each other, not only can enhance the article, be rational, but also makes the article layer by layer to deepen and enhance the article that reason.
such as .
was the paper color, deepened efforts.
Third, after Syria first meeting. This article first refers to the concentration of ink in the form of a detailed narrative of people or things, and then comments. Syria after the first meeting of the article is a narrative discussion of the further elaboration of the object or content, is the direct expression of the evaluation, feelings. So it will play a
you read the following essay, give it a try after the first meeting of the characteristics of Syria and the role of discussion:
my hobby a lot of my hobbies, love read, write and love to play chess. I remember in elementary school, I saw the grandfather and father playing chess, that was fun. I then wrapped grandfather taught me to play chess. My grandfather told me: As a second go, I have slowly learned to play chess, but I always grandpa fall by the wayside. I am not convinced, I thought, can not lose the old way down, we must How to do it? I think to want to go, with, why not ask for advice to the father do? I asked a father, learn to A few days later, I talked with my grandfather playing chess, using this tactic, true spirit and soon Grandpa Grandpa shocked, anxious scratching, how could not think of the tactics to deal with. I won a grandfather, a merry heart, I thought to myself this fall by the wayside under the grandfather became! Who would have thought did not last long, grandpa come up over my Then, I pointed my father learned to
Although I just learned to play chess, not long, but the perception by some reason I play chess:
chess is a two armies confront each other, like a battlefield, the two sides battle of wits; chess To view the global system, careful logistics, moving steadily, to defeat the enemy. The board is not only the battlefield, but also like the stage of life. Collections of pieces station different positions, duties and responsibilities are different, their duties, fulfill their duties, who should be the case. I very much appreciate the pawns, despite their low status, but the sense, only forward not back, perseverance, courage,
difficulties do not back down. I'm not precisely this spirit?
article first detailed narrative of his grandfather and learning how to play chess, not willing to do what grandpa fall by the wayside, how to ask for advice my father finally won the grandpa thing. On this basis, the small talk of the exposition - it is very profound and intriguing.
used in the narrative to learn a little talk, as the finishing touch, can greatly enhance the effect of expression article. Note that:
① Whether Syria after the first meeting, a narrative proposal, or the first meeting after Syria, the article should be a narrative focus on the process in detail made a brief narrative, or even a phrase or support language of the debate. This is because the narrative is the basis for discussion, debate is a narrative of sublimation.
② talk of a direct reasoning (narrative, describing an indirect reasoning), so use this expression argument, the language should be clear, not vague.
③ either talk on the issue of views, ideas, people can take advantage of articles mouth, tasting the other characters or events,Bailey UGG boots, people described their own opinions. Anyway, have a persuasive argument, opinion should be unique, not just parroting. Of course, to do this, and strive to improve awareness and understanding of the capacity of their own thinking is the premise. Their likes and dislikes is unknown, how can the right of the people or things made, healthy and positive comment on it? They know not deep, how can life published on the surrounding unique and profound debate it? Thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the argument? The main argument in narrative form what? What is the use of discussing an important role in expression, needs attention?
④ to
77. Society in the narrative in the narrative of Lyric Lyric
is of the people or things in the narrative, depicting the process of scene or object, use the language full of emotion and his own inner feelings (or happy or sad, or love or hate, or the praise or criticism) to express and expression.
people have feelings, a rich, wide range of feelings. Composition, I need to show it affection. Only shown their true feelings, the article in order to explain their true attitude of objective things.
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